Fiction Sample (Youth/Children)
(c) 2006, Fred R. Lybrand, The Camden Wars
The one thing you
must know is that Blake Williams was a reader. He
started when he was four years old. “I
know how to read,” Blake told his mother one morning during the Camden
Forinth, a time like both spring and fall on the planet you still call
Earth.
“How’s
that?” she asked her baby.
“Well, these letters
all make a sound. This one sounds
like “ca-uh” and this one sounds like “fraah”, Blake explained.
“So?” his mother
encouraged.
“Well,” Blake
announce dramatically. “Once you
know the letters you just add them up.”
“Excellent!” she clapped; and since then Blake
was officially a reader.
Mostly
Blake read adventures, which only makes sense; not because he was a
boy, but because he lived on Camden.
Camden is a
notorious planet of peace-guarders. The
double suns of Camden
give a striking kind of dual seasons which allow the different plants
and creatures to make offspring in continuous cycles.
The Moverbucks all hibernate just as the
carpetvines begin to cover the hills near Port Au Sales, Blake’s home
and backyard. Carpetvines grow
almost two feet a day and become the perfect place to hide and pretend
you’re a soldier of fame, like GrayDon the Winner, who set Camden
free from all wars over two millennia ago.
In the kind counsels of Port Au Sales, Blake
would hide in the carpetvines until covered, only to frighten a
lumbering Moverbuck on its way to the caves above the Salt Cliffs by
the Port Au Sales ocean. After
claiming victory, Blake would sit on the cliffs overlooking the glassy
sea when the two suns set and rose on the horizon, creating the
windless beauty of purple and pink against his own perfectly albino
skin.
These memories kept Blake focused as he heard
the metal lock shut and echo in the munitions bay of the rusty
transport that hurled along through the galaxy. Blake
wanted to cry, but crying wouldn’t help. He
just stayed motionless, like he played among the carpetvines.
Blake knew these men were dangerous and that
they knew nothing of peace. They
wore the scar of circles, which meant they had killed and would kill
again. Moreover, they mentioned the
most hated name in the galaxy, Raunderil.
Blake Williams wondered if Raunderil was on
the ship, and he wondered if he would be able to escape once the
transport was docked. Mostly, he
wondered if his parents knew he never made it to summer camp, that he
was lost in the cosmos, and that he missed them very much.
Blake didn’t wonder about one thing, though;
Blake knew he was going home. He
knew it because he had to know it…he had to get home and see the suns
set again before supper, to see Mom and Dad go on their walk, to feel
the peaceful settling into his bed, his very own bed.
But for now, every adventure he ever read was
a textbook; he only hoped things turned out for him like it always did
in the stories.
***
The story of the Camden Wars began six weeks
earlier in Blake’s bedroom.
“Why do I need this
many clothes?” he asked his mother with a high pitched frustration.
“Well, there are
lot’s of fun things to do at camp and they require different outfits,”
she answered matter-of-factly.
“Can’t I just get
what I need out of the dispenser?” he asked.
“Blake,” his Mom
explained, “We aren’t made of kasprillium. You’ll
have credits to get candy once a day; but stay away from the outfits,
the computers, and the pets. Honestly,
I don’t know why everything has to be purchased in a dispensing
machine.”
With that Blake just packed and decided to
hope for the best.
Soon he was on his way, Mom and Dad waving as
the Shuttle began its assent to the second orbit of Camden before using
the gravitational bounce to launch it out to Presidio’s 7th
moon where camp awaited; the very camp his parents met at as camp
counselors.
Blake just sat in his seat, not talking to any
of the other kids around him; hoping they would leave him alone, or
insist he belong, or both. Blake
wasn’t one to be around others, his parents had definite ideas about
schooling. He learned alone, or
with his mom, at home; everyday was a day of education.
He spent a lot of time in thought and study,
but when he got around others he felt like an alien.
Blake wasn’t even sure if being an alien was a
bad thing. Sometimes he felt alone,
but other times he felt “too bad for them”; soon followed by the guilt
that comes with pretending you’re better than others.
Blake was really like most 14 year old
Camdeniens, he wanted to be courageous and offer his best gifts to make
his world better; but he also felt like he didn’t have much to offer.
This confusion kept him in a tight cling with
childhood, but childhood wasn’t clinging to him.
Blake’s dad
also helped with school. He had
read a biography of a famous scientist on Earth by the name of Feynman,
who helped with the original splitting of the atom back in th 20th
century, by Earth years. Blake’s
dad would take him on walks like Feynman’s day, hoping something would
spring to the front.
“What’s that?” Blake asked his dad one day on
a walk when a creature Blake had never seen before sprang up through a
grove of garnache shrubs. The
creature could best be described as cross between a turtle and a
parrot, but without a shell in tow. It
was colored like a rainbow, moving from bright blue on its crown to
deep red in its feet. It made a
hissing sound like a cat and had a curious collection of almost
see-through white months flying about it in circles and waves as the
creature lumbered along, taking a few strokes with its wings every few
feet. The moths stayed in formation
and followed, or maybe led, as the creature moved in front of Blake and
his dad.
“Well son, that’s a bill-backed herpephiporus;
but who cares what it’s named, let’s watch what it does.”
Even then Blake new his dad just made up the
name, but like Feynman’s father, he wanted Blake to observe.
“Remember, Blake,” his dad often said, “the
more you look, the more you see.”
Maybe it was that memory of his Dad, or maybe
it was all the time he had spent watching things; but suddenly, Blake
notice something was wrong. He
carefully surveyed the kids. They
all looked normal, but a little quirky as you might expect for a whole
camp shuttle dedicated to home learners. The
counselors were just hanging around and looked normal, except the one
who stood by the pilot’s chamber. This
man had one thing out of place; a three day beard.
Counselors were clean, or at least looked
clean. None of this really caught
Blake like the sight outside his window. Blake
had marked the direction from the moment they left Camden’s
atmosphere as the light of the suns lost their bright reflection of the
planet’s surface and moons. The
Pleiades were high and just ahead, Alpha-Centaur was low and behind,
and Pegasus-Rilor straight out from his window.
Blake had only casually watched these stars
during his trip, but now he realized that Alpha-Centuar was straight
ahead, Pegasus-Rilor clearly behind, and the Pleiades were out of sight!
All this meant the direction of the shuttle
had changed by 90 degrees…they were not headed to camp.
Instead, they were headed in to the
demilitarized quadrant…a place that was like a swamp in space.
Rumors of hoodlums and bandits from the Swamp
echoed around campfires on Camden.
Sometimes the stories took on the shape of
Robinhood; a good man, misunderstood, making evil leaders pay for their
crimes. The others stories were of
evil men preying on the innocent, but never discovering how to break
the electron barriers which kept Camden safe and
at peace. Blake’s guts told him
that The Swamp was the wrong place to be; so, in an instant, he hatched
a plan for his own safety, and maybe for the safety of all the kids on
the shuttle. He just needed to see
if his dialatron was still fully charged.
***
Blake’s dialatron reminded him of his
grandfather, who Blake called The Wise One. Of
course his granddad was wise, but Blake called him the Wise One because
his granddad called Blake the Emperor. Blake
was the king and his grandfather was his counselor.
His granddad gave him the dialatron on his
twelfth birthday and explained it in terms Blake could appreciate.
“Yep, when I was a kid, one of our favorite
things to do was to create a haunted house and sell tickets to the
other kids in the neighborhood,” the Wise One began as Blake looked at
the curious blue dial and the strange hieroglyphics which were passing
by on the crystal screen of the dialatron.
“Why, oh Wise One?” Blake asked.
“Well Sire, it was when I first learned you
could trick the mind. We created
different booths in the lower level of our house.
Each booth contained something to create fear,
horror, or simply grossness in the visitor to our house of horrors.”
“Like what?” Blake
said as he punched the hieroglyphic pictures in a random sequence.
“No Blake!” his grandfather shouted.
But it was too late; Blake’s arm turned into a
tree limb, hanging stiff and straight with soaking wet brown moss
dripping to the floor in great clumps.
Blake started to laugh, but his grandfather
grabbed the dialatron too fast. “What
about the House of Horrors O’ Wise One?
“Well, as I was saying,” he continued as he
reversed the sequence on the dialatron and Blake’s arm returned to its
normal clear white color. “We had
different booths and the visitors were blindfolded along with the
excessive dim lighting we kept in place just in case a big nose fellow
could see out from under the blindfold. Each
booth had something in it we asked them to smell, or taste, or touch.
Spaghetti drenched in cooking oil served as
our collection of intestinal worms from the Gnutchie Tree bats; ‘large
enough to carry two children away, but not strong enough to be eaten
alive from the inside out by this’, we added to spice up the story.
Grapes were said to be eyeballs from the
prison colony morgue, and a hanging rope they touch suddenly had
dripping blood, which was really lukewarm red-sauce from momma’s
pantry.”
“And they fell for it?” Blake
asked. “Like saber-tooths for
saber-nip” granddad grinned.”
“So why, O’ Wise One, do you tell me of these
things before handing me my dialtatron.
“Your majesty,” his granddad said, “your
dialatron tricks the mind as we tricked our friend’s minds.”
It casts an image in front of you, but you
must make a suggestion for it to work.”
“So why did my arm look like a tree?”
“You were reading about the Deep
Forest
when I came into your room, were you not?” his grandfather asked.
“I was…wow!”
With that, the Wise One repeated the sequence
Blake had picked, and after a moment, Blakes arm began to change into
the tree limb again. But, before it
had finished, granddad asked, “Have you seen the new whisper-black
trifillian android’s arm?”
Before Blake could answer, the limb was
suddenly a powerful metallic black with a miniature control pad just
below the elbow blinking cobalt blue lights and circular patters.
“Woe!” Blake shouted.
“What?” the girl sitting behind Blake
whispered.
“Oh, nothing…sorry,” Blake said as his
grandfather faded away and the danger he was facing came back into
focus.
“Do you have a spare compact charger?”
Blake asked the girl.
“My name’s Brita, what’s your’s,” she asked
before adding, “…I don’t loan things to strangers.”
“Oh, I’m Blake,” he said a little
embarrassed…and a little excited.